Today’s assignment: edit your title and tagline. Make your readers’ first impression a good one!
I love my title so I have chosen not to change it, however I think my tagline could use some work. I took the advice from the assignment and used yesterday’s writing to update the tagline. Below I posted the original one and my new one.
My current tagline: I am a lover of life who woke up one day from a 40+ year slumber. I am opinionated, down to earth and most of all love to laugh. In my opinion, if you’re not laughing you’re not living. I’m trying to bring positivity to a negative world one reader at a time!
New tagline: After keeping the writer in me dormant most of my life, I finally found the courage to set her free! My goal is to speak my mind on topics in the world or in my vivid imagination. I would love to be an inspiration to others so they can find their voices. Join me as I take the journey of finding myself in this world, a rebirth of Lisa!
I may change my mind is a few days but then again I may not. Only time will tell.
Hi! Wow – you are the second blogger I read since starting Blogging 101 and I can so relate. I was dinking around on paper with titles for other blogs last night, for example: Rebirth, Fullyformed, SecondLife, etc. you get the picture, because I too, had put my writer on hold for such a long time raising a son, working, much personal “sleep walking”, that not until now could I safely commit, and Boom! she came out like a tiger. Wow. Thank you so much!!
Dusty
Thanks for reading Dusty! I am happy your inner writer has been released. I look forward to reading your creations!